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Topic Sentence: First of all,
Point: Napoleon’s military strategies that led him to his success as a leader and shows his heroic qualities. Without his skills and dedication, France would have been invaded and possibly destroyed during the revolution.
Proof: Napoleon was a member of the French military for many years and worked his way up to better serve his country. He was born in Ajaccio, on the Mediterranean island of Corsica but attended and later graduated a French military school in 1785. After this, he became a second lieutenant until he left for Corsica and two years later he joined his regiment again when the revolution was just getting started. When he rejoined his troops, he began rising the ranks and was soon appointed first lieutenant after he won his first battle at Toulon. He was imprisoned for suspected treason and was appointed to work in the maps